tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post3898043279314590484..comments2024-01-06T09:21:11.928-05:00Comments on Jessica K. McKendry: I Feel Bad For My Antagonist...Jesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-57202829321775676772012-02-27T08:55:09.042-05:002012-02-27T08:55:09.042-05:00So true. One of my YA book's villains is actua...So true. One of my YA book's villains is actually someone I pity, even if he is really twisted.Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-34405396493117020112012-02-26T18:45:52.775-05:002012-02-26T18:45:52.775-05:00Yes! I totally agree! You want your antagonists to...Yes! I totally agree! You want your antagonists to have depth, and a back story, but then you risk wanting to be nice to them. And you are so right about how we all think we're the heroes in our own tales. Including antagonists. Not only in stories, but in our own lives. I think almost all of us think that we're nice people, whose actions are justified.Caryn Caldwellhttp://www.caryncaldwell.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-89610461087737044442012-02-26T14:30:52.917-05:002012-02-26T14:30:52.917-05:00In my mind, the best antagonists are the ones you ...In my mind, the best antagonists are the ones you can identify with. Otherwise, well, what's the point of hating them? Sounds like you've got a fun character taking over :)Meradeth Houstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741790047121063893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-14103567211456916062012-02-25T18:40:36.773-05:002012-02-25T18:40:36.773-05:00I don't think it's silly, since villains/a...I don't think it's silly, since villains/antagonists are rarely pure evil (Sauron from LOTR is one exception I can think of right now).<br /><br />This is actually something I've been thinking about a lot lately. A project I'm outlining calls for turning the antagonist into the protagonist--and vice versa.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-11745023583638169192012-02-25T17:04:33.832-05:002012-02-25T17:04:33.832-05:00Ooh to have a protagonist and antagonist as the sa...Ooh to have a protagonist and antagonist as the same character is cool! That must be hard to write it that way! I know it would be hard for me :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-38177981762890373752012-02-25T16:58:48.420-05:002012-02-25T16:58:48.420-05:00Well, I guess some stories have to have bad guys l...Well, I guess some stories have to have bad guys like that too. And there have to be bad guys we don't feel sorry for! Thanks for stopping by :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-91510536968226837172012-02-25T16:57:16.435-05:002012-02-25T16:57:16.435-05:00Lol thanks :) And I'll check it out! Glad you ...Lol thanks :) And I'll check it out! Glad you mentioned it!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-58599607942215154022012-02-25T16:56:11.097-05:002012-02-25T16:56:11.097-05:00Ooh that's another good one. I feel bad for Sn...Ooh that's another good one. I feel bad for Snape, too.Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-9220892234065770382012-02-25T16:54:42.967-05:002012-02-25T16:54:42.967-05:00Yep, that's EXACTLY how I feel! I'm sad th...Yep, that's EXACTLY how I feel! I'm sad that I had to make someone the bad guy. Of course, there wouldn't be much of a story without him... Thanks for stopping by!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-24328470411921917462012-02-25T16:53:01.125-05:002012-02-25T16:53:01.125-05:00Aww thanks! I'll pick it up on Monday :)Aww thanks! I'll pick it up on Monday :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-33180397462630405572012-02-25T16:52:13.577-05:002012-02-25T16:52:13.577-05:00Nice to meet you, too! Thanks for following :)Nice to meet you, too! Thanks for following :)Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-4171049464325521172012-02-25T14:28:23.227-05:002012-02-25T14:28:23.227-05:00I think you get so emotionally attached to any of ...I think you get so emotionally attached to any of your characters (after all, it's our job as a writer to put the emotions into them) that you do feel bad when you make one of them the antagonist - whether that's from the very start of because of what happens to them throughout the course of the story.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-2435051762407132862012-02-25T13:28:42.175-05:002012-02-25T13:28:42.175-05:00Hi Jess, sure, feel bad for your antag, as an auth...Hi Jess, sure, feel bad for your antag, as an author, it's your job to "let loose the monsters on him" as Stephan King says!<br />BTW, I just awarded you a Versatile Blog award and TAGGED you in a fun, short writing game. Pop over to my blog to check it out! Catherine<br />http://catherinestine.blogspot.comCatherine Stinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08131569196977321229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-57127949263674711572012-02-25T12:33:45.642-05:002012-02-25T12:33:45.642-05:00I think that if you feel bad for your antagonist, ...I think that if you feel bad for your antagonist, you're probably doing something right. Very right, in fact. It means you've created a bad guy who is a real, multi-demensional human being. That's *excellent*. <br /><br />I just came across your blog and am now following you. Nice to meet you. :)SFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05126306619182458823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-91389974887719198872012-02-24T23:23:28.517-05:002012-02-24T23:23:28.517-05:00I can't wait till our vacation together when I...I can't wait till our vacation together when I can ask you all about the antagonist in your story! Love, GrandmaReikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13443056196571522239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-75642630692628701812012-02-24T21:52:03.765-05:002012-02-24T21:52:03.765-05:00I prefer to make my antagonists self-consciously b...I prefer to make my antagonists self-consciously bad. That doesn't make them one-dimensional; it takes some effort to portray that mentality. And I'm sure they don't resent being hated. They're too busy feeling contempt for the good guys.Mark Muratahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03562597698193306363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-35178887530260266792012-02-24T17:32:31.919-05:002012-02-24T17:32:31.919-05:00I rarely have a person as the antagonist. Sometime...I rarely have a person as the antagonist. Sometimes my main character fills both the protagonist and antagonist roles. <br /><br />I'm sure being the antagonist is hard, but that's why they write stories like Wicked.McKenzie McCannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11707799179783394809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-18811606744951603442012-02-24T16:33:52.318-05:002012-02-24T16:33:52.318-05:00Oh yes, I feel very bad for Vader.
I also feel a ...Oh yes, I feel very bad for Vader.<br /><br />I also feel a little bad for my current agonist and I'm hoping, by the end of it, that the readers will as well since he isn't really a bad guy per se. But his the dark lord.<br /><br />Though my last agonists were doing it for the good of their species, I didn't feel at all sympathetic for them.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-12623196448514710662012-02-24T14:03:31.378-05:002012-02-24T14:03:31.378-05:00It's those complex characters, like Darth Vade...It's those complex characters, like Darth Vader, that we can't help feeling for. I have one for the dragon story I've had on hold. The antagonist really thinks he's doing the right thing, but alas, he's not.Angela Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-39882707519590457602012-02-24T14:00:24.602-05:002012-02-24T14:00:24.602-05:00Hmm... I have to say that I wrote just a really cr...Hmm... I have to say that I wrote just a really creepy and terrible antagonist. I don't really feel sorry for him, but at the same time I do... the fact that he's so alone and kidnaps young men for company is so wrong, but I still kinda feel sorry for him. <br /><br />No one wants to be hated, so very true.Krista McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09230770035490273428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-38968447012783931312012-02-24T11:55:31.040-05:002012-02-24T11:55:31.040-05:00First, I can't believe you are only 15. You...First, I can't believe you are only 15. You've definitely got the jump on all us "old" writers. <br /><br />I think if you feel sorry for your antagonist, that's probably a good sign. It means there's enough to him (i.e. he's 3-dimensional, not cookie cutter) to feel sorry for. I mean, at one point that bad guy was a kid, with parents, and hopes and dreams. You can only start feeling for characters once they have some substance.<br /><br />If you're into flash - come join in on my 50 First Lines writing contest.<br /><br />http://theaccidentalnovelist.wordpress.com/2012/02/22/writing-contest-for-fun-and-profit-okay-i-lied-about-the-profit-part/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-65275746335386797592012-02-24T11:52:48.046-05:002012-02-24T11:52:48.046-05:00I always felt bad for Snape. I'm glad he actua...I always felt bad for Snape. I'm glad he actually ended up being a good guy :DSamantha Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09370961661054617338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-49341219633363355612012-02-24T10:26:20.538-05:002012-02-24T10:26:20.538-05:00I know exactly where you're coming from! My an...I know exactly where you're coming from! My antagonist's motivations don't come out until later on in the series, so most people don't get her deal, but I do. I know why she is the way she is, and it's hard not to feel bad for the things that went on in her life that changed her into the 'bad guy'.prerna picketthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06207620652405474672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-42811268822614048252012-02-24T10:25:27.590-05:002012-02-24T10:25:27.590-05:00Yes, I have one antagonist that I do feel bad for....Yes, I have one antagonist that I do feel bad for. She has an interesting backstory, and like you mentioned I'm the only one who knows all of it. It's hard to write her story sometimes because she is "likeable" she doesn't think she's hurting anyone...but of course she is the bad "guy" so she has to be bad. :)<br /><br />Michelle :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08014841868649011587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-26512109760476649882012-02-24T09:51:57.969-05:002012-02-24T09:51:57.969-05:00I think that's great when we can write an anta...I think that's great when we can write an antagonist that isn't one dimensional. That isn't 'all bad'. That in some sick way feels justified doing what they're doing.<br /><br />I hope to accomplish that with a future WIP. :)<br /><br />So sorry about the competition. You'll get em' next time!Kelley Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06373650788799372118noreply@blogger.com