tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post6938497343267657103..comments2024-01-06T09:21:11.928-05:00Comments on Jessica K. McKendry: The DistractionJesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02000569858548717605noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-80070988985962353772012-08-16T19:13:09.579-04:002012-08-16T19:13:09.579-04:00She's a tough character! And clever, too--grea...She's a tough character! And clever, too--great flash fiction.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-17896182215460886802012-08-15T21:38:39.306-04:002012-08-15T21:38:39.306-04:00Great story. Very McGyver-like. Creates a good vis...Great story. Very McGyver-like. Creates a good visual in few words. Chuckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13676928110297819368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-63551105901644565812012-08-15T15:49:09.390-04:002012-08-15T15:49:09.390-04:00Ruthless character. I like it!Ruthless character. I like it!Emily R. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03892444969625637064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-54309776330575703012012-08-15T11:53:27.379-04:002012-08-15T11:53:27.379-04:00Not bad at all. My only concern is your abundance...Not bad at all. My only concern is your abundance of "-ly" adverbs. When I saw that the second word was one of them it threw me a bit.Patrick Stahlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09690555802232025818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-767025342430483177.post-82438519550290025092012-08-15T11:16:17.415-04:002012-08-15T11:16:17.415-04:00Great story, Jess. I was just wondering about the...Great story, Jess. I was just wondering about the other guards - there is only one guard watching her cell that she overpowers but what about the other ones? I like the reference to her mental strength. Hope she manages to escape. Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.com