Today is day 2 of the legendary A to Z Challenge!
Hope you enjoy!
B is for Broken
Listen to the rain.
Falling by the bucketful, crashing to the ground.
From far away, someone might wonder what it would feel like to be a drop of rain. They might wonder what it’s like to fall without knowing you’re falling.
But not me.
Because I know what it feels like to hit the ground.
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And here's an awesome song by Evanescence that I think fits the mood 'broken':
Have a Beautiful day!
--Jess
21 comments:
That's really beautifully written. And I love the Evanescence song.
This is great! The last line has so much impact (no pun intended). Really nice, Jess.
This is really nice and the last line does tie it in beautifully.(:
Lovely song choice - and perfectly fits the mood you create in your awesome poem.
Wow, beautiful!
Sometimes it does feel like we are being dashed against the ground. Broken means we can put ourselves back together.
Love the vid-clip.
WOW, love that last line!!
great job! The clip really sets the mood.
This is really good. What an awesome final line!
Very well written and definitely makes me want to read more after that last line! :D
"Because I know what it feels like to hit the ground"
This line, by itself, is rather pain-filled. Combined with the rest of the words, the emotion multiplies. I enjoyed this. Thank you.
Really lovely and moving!
You are so talented! Back tomorrow for sure!
Oh, very nice poem, I like it. And Evanescence really captures that emotion, don't they?
You've picked one of my favorite groups :)
And great writing. I really look forward to your posts :)
Very nice! Kudo's!! :)
My emotion reaction to the last line: Gasp.
Nice! I loved the last line best of all because it made the poem take a cool twist.
That's... wow. Awesome. :)
Wonderful. And the last line hits you like a ton of bricks :-)
Wow. Thats deep.
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