Friday, April 6, 2012

F is for Forsaken

F is for Forsaken

We have been forgotten.
Alone and left for dead.
Behind your lies, I found the truth;
A truth I’ve come to dread.

The darkness closes in,
And it closes in too fast,
The world that we once had,
Is but a dream lost in the past.

This all is just a nightmare,
Yet from one we can’t awaken.
We must pay for what we’ve done,
Today, we are forsaken.

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And here's one of the many songs I write to a lot by Within Temptation, called Forsaken...



Have a fabulous day!

--Jess

10 comments:

Sally said...

I like that poem, Jess.

McKenzie McCann said...

Congrats on 300 followers! I saw you were close the other day. :)

Alyssa said...

This poem is really good! Nice rhythm and rhyme scheme. :)

Cortney Pearson said...

Great poem! At first I thought of the characters from Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time series, lol! :D

Kelley said...

I love that series Cortney! :)

Kelley said...

This is beautiful. Ever thought of writing a song?

Sarah F. said...

Again, another beautiful post! I simply can not write poetry and so am all the more amazed at people who can.
~Sarah F.

www.inklinedwriters.blogspot.com

Michelle Pickett said...

Beautifully written. I admire those who can write poetry.

Michelle :)
www.michelle-pickett.com/blog

Reiko said...

At the tender age of 15, you write with such finesse and realism. It makes me wonder who you might have been in your previous life, where you lived, how long ago, and what brought you to the point of being forsaken. Every time I read what you write, I want to know more.

Lyla said...

Oh wow, great poem, Jess.

And I LOVE WT! I write to them, too! I also love/write to other European bands like Muse, Epica, Nightwish, After Forever, Hurts, and Krypteria.

I've left you a blog award over at:
http://lylawrites.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-awards-galore-sequel.html

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