F is for Forsaken
We have been forgotten.
Alone and left for dead.
Behind your lies, I found the truth;
A truth I’ve come to dread.
The darkness closes in,
And it closes in too fast,
The world that we once had,
Is but a dream lost in the past.
This all is just a nightmare,
Yet from one we can’t awaken.
We must pay for what we’ve done,
Today, we are forsaken.
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And here's one of the many songs I write to a lot by Within Temptation, called Forsaken...
Have a fabulous day!
--Jess
10 comments:
I like that poem, Jess.
Congrats on 300 followers! I saw you were close the other day. :)
This poem is really good! Nice rhythm and rhyme scheme. :)
Great poem! At first I thought of the characters from Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time series, lol! :D
I love that series Cortney! :)
This is beautiful. Ever thought of writing a song?
Again, another beautiful post! I simply can not write poetry and so am all the more amazed at people who can.
~Sarah F.
www.inklinedwriters.blogspot.com
Beautifully written. I admire those who can write poetry.
Michelle :)
www.michelle-pickett.com/blog
At the tender age of 15, you write with such finesse and realism. It makes me wonder who you might have been in your previous life, where you lived, how long ago, and what brought you to the point of being forsaken. Every time I read what you write, I want to know more.
Oh wow, great poem, Jess.
And I LOVE WT! I write to them, too! I also love/write to other European bands like Muse, Epica, Nightwish, After Forever, Hurts, and Krypteria.
I've left you a blog award over at:
http://lylawrites.blogspot.com/2012/04/blog-awards-galore-sequel.html
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